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Imagine this…
You’re desperate to find a candle that smells like heaven—without setting your sinuses on fire.
After 30 failed searches for The One, your Instagram feed is now a sea of ads for “non-toxic,” “organic,” and “relaxing” candles.
But every single one sounds the same.
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Meh.
You sigh and keep scrolling through dachshund videos when a headline grabs your attention:
“The candle that doesn’t sacrifice your sinuses for scent.”
It’s plastered at the top of a video showing a candle burning softly on a sandy beach.
Your eyes jump down to the caption.
“Our new Beach Days candle transports you to the sun-soaked, white-sand beaches of Tahiti. With a blend of creamy vanilla, zesty lime, and a hint of coconut, it’s paradise in a jar—minus the headaches.”
Not only does the description paint a vivid mental picture of a Tahitian beach, but you can almost smell it.
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Within five minutes, you’re adding the candle to your cart and running to find your credit card.
What persuaded you to buy this non-toxic candle over all the rest?
In today’s edition of Why We Buy 🧠we’ll explore Concrete Phrases—why we are hardwired to respond to them over abstract phrases.
Let’s get into it.
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đź§ The Psychology of Concrete Phrases
Our brains, which process images 60,000X faster than text, are naturally drawn to imagery.
And concrete phrases turn words into mental pictures.
Richard Shotton, best-selling author of The Choice Factory and consultant in behavioral science marketing, retested a 1972 experiment on the memorability of concrete versus abstract phrases.
But here’s the key: He wanted to test phrases commonly seen in marketing.
So participants heard a mix of concrete phrases such as “money in your pocket” and “skinny jeans” along with abstract phrases like “innovative quality” and “wholesome nutrition.”
The result?
Participants remembered only 0.7% of the abstract phrases and 6.7% of the concrete phrases—a tenfold increase in memorability.
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This finding is like striking gold in the marketing world.
When you use sensory-rich, specific language, your product or message becomes real in your customer’s mind.
And when they can picture it, they’re one step closer to buying it.
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🤑 How To Apply This
Alright, so how can you apply this right now to sell more?
eCommerce​
​Transform your messaging from a vitamin into a painkiller
❌ Generic: “High-storage capacity.”
✅ Concrete: “1,000 songs in your pocket.”
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Apple turned the pain of lugging around a ton of bulky CDs into a highly desired, easy-to-visualize promise. Bonus points: They did it in just 5 words.
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Product descriptions​
​Tap into sensory experiences
❌ Generic: “Our chocolate is delicious.”
✅ Concrete: “Our chocolate offers creamy smoothness that melts in your mouth.”
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By tapping into a delightful sensory experience, Lindt gets mouths watering—and wallets opening.
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​Rentals​
​Use hyper-specific numbers
❌ Generic: “Earn more money renting out your house.”
✅ Concrete: “Earn $1,078 in 7 nights.”
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By ditching vague, overstated promises like “earn more money,” Airbnb makes you wanna open your house to strangers ASAP.
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đź’Ą The Short of It
Abstract phrases paint your product or service as a “vitamin.” They’re nice-to-have, forgettable options. *womp womp*​
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Meanwhile, concrete phrases paint a vivid mental picture that grabs our attention and sticks in our minds.
And when your messaging is spot-on, they can even transform a promise into a “painkiller”—AKA a must-have solution—so potential customers are more likely to hit the “Buy now” button.
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Until next time, happy selling!​
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